Cōsmo
Example (Before/After)
Example (Before/After)
Minimal adjectives: Let data or direct language convey impact instead of piling on superlatives.
Example (Before/After)
“We design brands, websites, and digital ecosystems.”
Example (Before/After)
We love em-dashes ( — ): Use them to add emphasis or create a short, dynamic break within a sentence.
Spacing: CDA typically prefers no spaces around the em-dash.
“We have one goal—empower your brand to shape the future.”
Example (Before/After)
Colons ( : ) introduce lists or clarifications: “Our mission is clear: create brands that connect.”
These arrow icons (←↑→↓↔↕↖↗↘↙↰↳↴↵) can be handy to illustrate design flows, directional instructions, or user journeys.
Example: “The user journey looks like this: Start ← Onboarding → Personalization → Checkout → Completion.”
Wordiness & Verbosity
After: “Now is the time to evaluate our methods and find the best ways to collaborate.”
Run-on Sentence
After: “We’re excited about the next sprint—it will finalize the user journey. After that, we’ll integrate analytics.”
Clarity & Authenticity
Read it aloud: Does it sound natural, friendly, and clear? If not, revise.
Stay consistent: From punctuation to word choice, keep the details uniform.